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Belfan Flying Blind
Joined: 12 Apr 2014 Posts: 19 Location: Dining Room table
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2017 11:46 am Post subject: |
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I gave it a 4/5, in part because of the pace at the beginning, it all happened too fast, or maybe I just didn't see it coming.
I actually liked the Nuke/ Cap stuff. The way DD describes what he "saw", especially the Thor panel was great. The way that Thor ,just putting out fires, being described as fantastical... just great writing... made me want to write that way. |
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Dimetre Underboss
Joined: 16 Feb 2006 Posts: 1366 Location: Toronto
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Exilestate Flying Blind
Joined: 11 Aug 2016 Posts: 2 Location: Georgia
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2024 12:39 pm Post subject: |
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Still a 5 overall for me also, but I do agree bringing in Nuke to the story did hurt it a little. |
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