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Jackson Natchios · Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 11:06 pm Post subject: The Child Of Sin

Like I said in a Previous Post Im currently working on a Series im writing about what If Daredevil and Elektra Had a Child.. Well as You see in my Name I choosed his Name Is Jackson Natchios... lemme give you guys his Stats

I Tweeked out a few things so here we go

Jackson Natchios

Real Name/Birth Name: Jackson Nikolas Murdock

Aliases: Devil Child, Nikko, Daredevil Jr., Jax, Jackie

Age: Depending on what Era from 3 to 32 years of Age

Powers and Abilities: Due to him being the son of Daredevil Jackson was able to inherit the stronger senses he had since Matthew was blinded along with normal Sight along with help from Elektra's training. Training with His Mother Elektra who trained him in all forms of martial arts and weapons Master Stick taught her and Matthew as well as helping develop stronger senses besides sight since Jackson was four years old. Is very Agile with Olympic level skills and military Training from S.H.I.E.L.D. as well as a High Pain Tolerance...

Weaknesses: Jackson has no known weaknesses but if one where to come it would have to be A Mental one due to the fact His father is a touchy subject since He passed away when he was three and his Mother Elektra when she went missing when he was seventeen..

Hair Color: Naturally red like his father's but he dyes his hair jet black

Eye Color: Baby blue

General Attitude: He has a TRUST NO ONE attitude with a cold personality, very quiet. Has the will to think things out like his father and work well under pressure like him with the sly wit of His Mother Elektra... But get on his good side he still is a very quiet person with a kind heart...

Scars or Marks: Jackson has some Scaring from previous fights as well as the one across his left eye that still Haunts him till this day where he got it from his Mother Battling and Killing Bulls eye where Bulls eye threw a card at the child and Iron Fist trying to get him out of the way and the card scaring the child.. As well as a scar on his upper right lip from a knife fight against some gang members in Japan.

Relationships: Jackson is not the type of person that trusts easily due to his mother's training but he does have few allies such as Nick Fury and The S.H.I.E.L.D. Unit since he joined at the Age of 19 due to his intelligence and discipline. Due to Elektra going missing when he was seventeen Daniel "Iron Fist" Rand became a father figure to Jackson still continuing his training with Rand. Luke Cage is another person he does have respect for due to him acting like a “Big Brother” to young Jackson always looking out for his well being and as a request from Rand himself. Elektra Natchios is who he trusts the most due to her being his mother as well as raising him since infancy and training him in martial arts ,athletics and en training since the age of four in which Elektra was a strict yet loving mother to him. Last but not least since being raised in Japan, Jackson made some friends as he attended high school over there near the military base in Yokosuka he knew from school.

That is the revamp of Jackson's History
hope you like the improvements

MarcWagz · Flying Blind Joined: 16 Jan 2008 Posts: 83

reminds me of that incredibly stupid marvel mangaverse...

Not sure if an Irish/Greek union would end with a son named "Jackson"

Francesco · Underboss Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 1307

How does his outfit/costume look like?

Jackson Natchios · Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 6:02 pm Post subject:

well his costume is gonna be the S.H.I.E.L.D. outfit when hes with them with a Few Mods add to it... Such as he wears a Black Berret and He has the Semi Cut Sleaves on his top with cargo pants and in the back he carries his Mother's Sai's but mostly uses a Army Knife

I do plan on him Becoming the Next Daredevil later on

as well to The Reason why He uses Natchios is to Hide that he Is Daredevil's son and that he doesnt want to use his Father's Last name cause he thinks of it as a Burdon... Im still writing it but that is one of the reasons why...

And the Name Jackson is to honor DD's father's name I just thought it matches really well and if you see a rough skectch im working on with Jackson you will see why I chose the name Jackson

james castle · Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 7:52 pm Post subject:

I always figured the son or DD and Elektra would be a military man (?). I assume your story will make sense of that.

Friendly advice says lose the scar. Cable pretty much killed that for comic characters forever.
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Francesco · Underboss Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 1307

He's right. Scars are very cliché.

Jackson Natchios · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:04 pm Post subject:

Well I am Still in Writing of the Basic Story and Im starting it out with Him in Iron Fist on the Rooftops of Soho... I will Give you Guys a Little Sample of What Im Writing...

As they where on the roof tops of Soho.. Daniel "The Iron Fist" Rand and Jackson Natchios where relaxing in a fluid motion pratcticing the Calm Art of Tai Chi with some extra moves added by Rand himself. Jackson with his mother's trademark red bandanna covering his eyes to further improve the abilities that where given to him by his father.

As they where in a trance like motion moving togther as they where one Jackson asks Daniel a question about his father and what he was like. "Danny if you do not mind me asking what was my father really like?" Jackson said in a calm yet stern way. Daniel keeps going and he speaks "Well if I could say one thing about you father is...He was the type of man that always looked to do what is right.. and since he was blind he always showed his emotions through every thing he did.." Jackson still going with The Tai Chi movements he gets a picture in his head how his father was like... As Jackson stopped Daniel says " You are alot like your father if you ever wore The Costume people would think you where Him.."

That is a Rough Draft right now of the Story.. Its not all of it but just a small sample.. Tell me what you guys think of it so far???

Blind Alley · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:06 pm Post subject:

The "since he was blind he always showed his emotions through every thing he did" bit doesn't sound good to me.
I can't really explain why, but these words just don't ring true to me...

And Iron Fist wouldn't be my first choice to know better who Matt Murdock was. What about Foggy ? or Ben Urich ?

This character seems to inherit a lot of stuff from the "Ninja" side of MM but what about the other side ?
What's his job ? Is he just another super-spy ?

From what you gave us, I feel the character lacks complexity.
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Jackson Natchios · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:40 pm Post subject:

james castle · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:26 pm Post subject:

Yeah, before Bendis showed up Iron Fist wasn't really a part of the Daredevil mythos. Bendis and Bru have sort of crowbarred Rand and Luke Cage into Matt's life (as part of the super tacky and still ongoing "Aren't 70/80s Marvel Characters Cool?" retro nightmare). It's vogue to have Iron Fist hopping around now but he really doesn't know Matt from Adam.

Also, have you thought through the ages of these characters? If Jackson is a SHIELD/Ex-SHIELD agent he has to be at least in his 20s. That puts Elektra, Bullseye and Rand closer to their 50s or beyond.
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Jackson Natchios · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:41 pm Post subject:

james castle · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:37 pm Post subject:

Does anyone remember when that kid came on the board claiming that he and his friends were about to mount a shot for shot amatuer movie version of Born Again?

Anyone getting deva vu?

If you wanna write something: write something and post it. All this hinting and "sneak peek" nonsense is just attention getting silliness.
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Jackson Natchios · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:09 pm Post subject:

rgj · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:21 pm Post subject:

james castle · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:37 pm Post subject:

Ohhhhh, I can't wait!!!!!
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